The Daily Press
Body In Lake:
Coincidence or not, on Friday the 13th, the body of a man was found in Lake Clowndeep, Auckland. Henry Lowe, local resident of Auckland, was going for his daily walk, when he came across the body. “At first, all I could see was feet, I thought it was a new statute to the lake.” Henry reported. Henry called the police immediately. When they arrived, they identified the man to be David Mow, a middle aged man from Hamilton. Supposedly on a holiday. Police are undecided if it was a suicide, or murder.
-Pene
-Pene
Hey, Pene! Neat report writing and could have been published in the local newspaper. Just check for use of commas on the last line, instead of the full stops.
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